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Emperor  Joined: Wed Apr 16, 2003 1:25 am Posts: 2560 
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  Writting CVHey, I need advice. Do not mock much.
is my current CV. How to improve it? (including eng. lang. corrections) I would appreciate that, but cannot pay. _________________ ++ |
| Fri Oct 10, 2003 9:55 am |
 
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Minor Diety  Joined: Fri Apr 11, 2003 2:17 pm Posts: 7721 Location: Centre of the sun
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Bah, havent made my CV for 4 years. I wouldnt know how to help.
Just lie, it always works. _________________ "Well a very, very hevate, ah, heavy duh burtation tonight. We had a very derrist derrison, bite, let's go ahead and terrist teysond those fullabit who have the pit." - Serene Branson |
| Fri Oct 10, 2003 9:57 am |
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Emperor  Joined: Tue Apr 01, 2003 3:42 am Posts: 2005 Location: Under my wife AND son's thumbs.. in essex! chavs! everywhere!!
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no, DON'T lie, you can get seriosly done for that, and besides, if you blatantly can't do the job anyway, you won't last very long. _________________ Sleep deprivation for teh lose |
| Fri Oct 10, 2003 9:58 am |
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Minor Diety Joined: Fri Apr 11, 2003 2:17 pm Posts: 7721 Location: Centre of the sun
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Yes you will. Just blag it.
_________________ "Well a very, very hevate, ah, heavy duh burtation tonight. We had a very derrist derrison, bite, let's go ahead and terrist teysond those fullabit who have the pit." - Serene Branson |
| Fri Oct 10, 2003 9:59 am |
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Emperor Joined: Wed Apr 16, 2003 1:25 am Posts: 2560
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NO! This CV is about, oh well, ... 98% truth. I swear I belive in it.
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| Fri Oct 10, 2003 9:59 am |
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Minor Diety Joined: Fri Apr 11, 2003 2:17 pm Posts: 7721 Location: Centre of the sun
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Where is the 2% lie then?
_________________ "Well a very, very hevate, ah, heavy duh burtation tonight. We had a very derrist derrison, bite, let's go ahead and terrist teysond those fullabit who have the pit." - Serene Branson |
| Fri Oct 10, 2003 10:00 am |
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Minor Diety  Joined: Tue Apr 01, 2003 10:23 am Posts: 3956 Location: Amsterdam
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_________________ Melchett: As private parts to the gods are we: they play with us for their sport! |
| Fri Oct 10, 2003 10:03 am |
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Minor Diety Joined: Fri Apr 11, 2003 2:17 pm Posts: 7721 Location: Centre of the sun
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nope. 3d aswell.
_________________ "Well a very, very hevate, ah, heavy duh burtation tonight. We had a very derrist derrison, bite, let's go ahead and terrist teysond those fullabit who have the pit." - Serene Branson |
| Fri Oct 10, 2003 10:06 am |
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Emperor Joined: Wed Apr 16, 2003 1:25 am Posts: 2560
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_________________ ++ Last edited by RB on Fri Oct 10, 2003 10:49 am, edited 2 times in total. |
| Fri Oct 10, 2003 10:14 am |
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Emperor Joined: Wed Apr 16, 2003 1:25 am Posts: 2560
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_________________ ++ |
| Fri Oct 10, 2003 10:22 am |
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Minor Diety Joined: Fri Apr 11, 2003 2:17 pm Posts: 7721 Location: Centre of the sun
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_________________ "Well a very, very hevate, ah, heavy duh burtation tonight. We had a very derrist derrison, bite, let's go ahead and terrist teysond those fullabit who have the pit." - Serene Branson |
| Fri Oct 10, 2003 12:21 pm |
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Minor Diety  Joined: Mon Mar 31, 2003 7:23 am Posts: 14892 Location: behind a good glass of Duvel
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K...there are some spelling mistakes in there, i'll go over them systematically
->It's "curriculum vitae" under the "experience" section: ->scratch the "i" in development ->it's "generally" instead of "genarally" ->"seperate" instead of "separate" ->"scenary"= i think you're looking for "scenario" here. (but if you do mean "background" it's "scenEry") That's it as far as spelling is concerned i think... ----------------------------------------------------- Then, mistakes in wording things: under "game development and design": ->you can and should rephrase the first sentence into something simpler. Something like "Worked in two different teams" would do the job imho, and sounds less unnatural. ->"both teams have crumbled", not "has" ->"low finance abilities" would best be paraphrased as "few financial means/resources" ->"general work on sound" instead of "work on sound, generally" under "software using": ->it's "operating systems", not "operative systems". That would mean the same as surgery systems. 
under "education": ->"in my second year of.." rather than "on" ----------------------------------------------------- That's about the most elementary mistakes i can see in there, i hope my yakking here helped.
Would any native english speaker care to have a good look at the CV as well for GF? I mean, i think my english is a-ok but it's still better to have a native speaker in aye.  _________________ "I find a Burger Tank in this place? I'm-a be a one-man cheeseburger apocalypse." - Coach |
| Fri Oct 10, 2003 12:57 pm |
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Minor Diety  Joined: Fri Apr 11, 2003 5:09 pm Posts: 4004 Location: Walsall, West Mids, UK
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lol, i gotta re do a CV. might do that tonight actually...
_________________ Games to complete: GTA IV [100%] (For Multiplayer next!) Fallout 3 [50%] Rock Band [35%] http://www.cafepress.com/SmeepProducts |
| Fri Oct 10, 2003 2:09 pm |
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Felix Rex  Joined: Fri Mar 28, 2003 6:01 pm Posts: 16662 Location: On a slope
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_________________ They who can give up essential liberty to obtain a little temporary safety, deserve neither liberty nor safety. |
| Fri Oct 10, 2003 3:59 pm |
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Minor Diety Joined: Mon Mar 31, 2003 7:23 am Posts: 14892 Location: behind a good glass of Duvel
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_________________ "I find a Burger Tank in this place? I'm-a be a one-man cheeseburger apocalypse." - Coach |
| Fri Oct 10, 2003 4:43 pm |
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