no, DON'T lie, you can get seriosly done for that, and besides, if you blatantly can't do the job anyway, you won't last very long.
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| Author: | RB [ Fri Oct 10, 2003 9:55 am ] |
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Hey, I need advice. Do not mock much. is my current CV. How to improve it? (including eng. lang. corrections) I would appreciate that, but cannot pay. |
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| Author: | derf [ Fri Oct 10, 2003 9:57 am ] |
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Bah, havent made my CV for 4 years. I wouldnt know how to help. Just lie, it always works. |
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| Author: | tyranus [ Fri Oct 10, 2003 9:58 am ] |
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no, DON'T lie, you can get seriosly done for that, and besides, if you blatantly can't do the job anyway, you won't last very long. |
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| Author: | derf [ Fri Oct 10, 2003 9:59 am ] |
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Yes you will. Just blag it. |
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| Author: | RB [ Fri Oct 10, 2003 9:59 am ] |
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NO! This CV is about, oh well, ... 98% truth. I swear I belive in it. |
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| Author: | derf [ Fri Oct 10, 2003 10:00 am ] |
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Where is the 2% lie then? |
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| Author: | Arathorn [ Fri Oct 10, 2003 10:03 am ] |
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| Author: | derf [ Fri Oct 10, 2003 10:06 am ] |
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nope. 3d aswell. |
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| Author: | RB [ Fri Oct 10, 2003 10:14 am ] |
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| Author: | RB [ Fri Oct 10, 2003 10:22 am ] |
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| Author: | derf [ Fri Oct 10, 2003 12:21 pm ] |
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| Author: | Rinox [ Fri Oct 10, 2003 12:57 pm ] |
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K...there are some spelling mistakes in there, i'll go over them systematically ->It's "curriculum vitae" under the "experience" section: ->scratch the "i" in development ->it's "generally" instead of "genarally" ->"seperate" instead of "separate" ->"scenary"= i think you're looking for "scenario" here. (but if you do mean "background" it's "scenEry") That's it as far as spelling is concerned i think... ----------------------------------------------------- Then, mistakes in wording things: under "game development and design": ->you can and should rephrase the first sentence into something simpler. Something like "Worked in two different teams" would do the job imho, and sounds less unnatural. ->"both teams have crumbled", not "has" ->"low finance abilities" would best be paraphrased as "few financial means/resources" ->"general work on sound" instead of "work on sound, generally" under "software using": ->it's "operating systems", not "operative systems". That would mean the same as surgery systems. 
under "education": ->"in my second year of.." rather than "on" ----------------------------------------------------- That's about the most elementary mistakes i can see in there, i hope my yakking here helped.
Would any native english speaker care to have a good look at the CV as well for GF? I mean, i think my english is a-ok but it's still better to have a native speaker in aye. 
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| Author: | Mole [ Fri Oct 10, 2003 2:09 pm ] |
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lol, i gotta re do a CV. might do that tonight actually... |
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| Author: | Satis [ Fri Oct 10, 2003 3:59 pm ] |
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| Author: | Rinox [ Fri Oct 10, 2003 4:43 pm ] |
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